Searria H.

Hey there, Spark! So.....I had saved this in my favourites bar like two years ago, and I have no idea how I've managed to not review it yet. But I'm ...

Woah, something weird happened in that last one. Sorry. Here's the full review: Hey there! Remember when you asked that one YWSer to review this piece back in 10,000, B.C.? ...

Hi there, Fullmetal! I'm sorry to say that I have no idea what provided the inspiration for this fanfic, so I must review it just as a general piece. I ...

Hey there, Craz33me! Just stopping by for a review. :) You had good control over your rhyming scheme. I usually don't like rhymed poems because they feel forced and written ...

Hey, Dilettante! I like the dynamic between Zane and Cara. I do wish I could have seen that whole development, though. Let me know if you post any of the ...

I'm sorry it took me so long to come review, but I didn't see your request until this morning. Of the three links you sent me, this one is my ...

Hi there, Anwesha! I liked the general message of this poem, and I think you have a lot of room to explore in this piece. :D There were just a ...

Hi, Ephemeral! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying it so far. I'm Searria, or "Sea" for short. :smt039 Very nice piece. :) As a fellow string ...

Hey, Brie! It's your friendly neighbourhood Searria here for another review. :) Reading this piece a few moments ago, I had this thought nagging in my mind that it reminded ...

Hallo, Brie! Here as requested. :D You have an interesting prose voice. Your characters are clear, and their interactions for the most part seem natural. :D So - on to ...

Hello, Judy! Here as requested. :D I think you have a good start here, and you obviously know what you're talking about. ;) As I'm not quite as well-versed in ...

Hi, Broken! When I told you in your welcome thread to expect a review in the near future, I promise I had intended for it to be nearer than almost ...

This was absolutely heartbreaking. I've never experienced, witnessed, or had any knowledge of bullying before, so thank you for opening my eyes. You got me as close to tears as ...

Hello, Paintingtherain97! I, like the users above me, liked your message. I've been wanting to write something to this effect for a while. You have a good idea here, but ...

Hi, Kalyamarie!1 I agree that your main idea was a tad bit cliche, but cute just the same. Your rhyming scheme was very consistent. Yay! But your rhythm and flow ...